Progress on magazine feature

Now that I have completed the greatest wins box I am really pleased with how it looks, I feel that I have achieved the engaging and light hearted affect I was trying to achieve and am now ready to move onto the main body of the article. To begin with I decided that my main headline definitely needed to be some sort of pun or play on words to do with horses, showing or riding. When looking through existing products I felt that headlines really set the tone for the rest of the feature, and a pun is usually the way in which it is done. After experimenting with a few different phrases I decided upon "showing off". It not only links to their profession of producing and competing ponies on the showing circuit, but also refers to the documentary and article in themselves, in that it is all about them being able to proudly "show off"about what it is that they do and the wonderful success that they have already had together as a show team. In addition to this I also added in the columns that the body of my article will fill.